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Quadroblitz
I'm Snowflake
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[] They are possessed by an angel
[] They are possessed by a demon
[] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie
[] They are physically strong
[] They have a rare hair/fur colour
[X ] Their eyes are an unusual colour
[X] This happens to be red ((red, blue, and black))
[ ] Their eyes change colour
[] They have wings
[] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift
[/] They are immortal ((can be killed by normal things but is immune to disease and will not die of old age))
[ ] (if a female) they have large boobs
[ ] (if a male) they are very muscular
[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender.
[X] They are telekinetic/pyrokinetic/etc
[X ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc
[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
[] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
[ ] They are a healer
[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family
[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background
[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents
[ ] They ran away from home
[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death
[X] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature
[ ] They never knew their parents
[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child
[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender
[X] They have lots of friends/no friends
[/]They are emo/cutesy  (he's kinda cute I guess.)
[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
[X ] They are currently in a relationship
[ X] They have a mental disorder ((OCD))
[ ] They have an emotional disorder
[ ] They struggle to stay sane
[X ] They are a psycho
[ ] They have multiple personalities
[X] They are very intelligent
[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc.
[] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
[ ] They have a guardian spirit
[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul
[ ] Their soul is not the same as them
[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
[ ] Some part of their body glows
[X] They have a rare/unusual name  
[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc.
[ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth/a young age
[ ] They are connected with a certain element
[ ] They are connected with a certain animal
[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
[ ] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood
[/] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared
[ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
[ ] They are hiding from someone/something
[ ] They have a rare blood type
[ ] They cry blood
[X] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown ((getting his suit ripped or dirty))
[ ] They are from a different country to where they live
[X] They are very mysterious/dark
[] They are very lively/happy
[x] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
[X] They are very patient
[ ] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here)
[X] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear ((His whole outfit pretty much))
[ ] They have amnesia
[ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
[ ] The have a curse upon them
[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy
[ ] They are 'the chosen one'
[ ] They have insomnia

Overall points:  15.5

Take points off your OCs overall score if they fit any of the following statements:

[ ] They smoke
[ ] They are an alcoholic
[ ] They are overweight
[ ] They are addicted to drugs
[X] They have a short temper
[X] They enjoy bullying others ((does torture count?))
[X] They do not care much about others
[ ] They are emotionless

Point Reductions: 3

Final score: 12.5

RESULT: Balanced Character
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< 5 Anti-Sue
Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit


6-15 Balanced Character
If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


16-25 Borderline Mary-Sue
We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26 < Mary-Sue

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